Run with me in my perpetual haste. Meander with me in my devious course. Wander with me in my desperate search. Slalom with me through my discordant vacillation. Wade with me through my hopeless misery. Sink with me in my unrequited love. Spin with me in my eddying emotion. Cruise with me through my youthful fantasy. Flow with me in my surging spontaneity. Swim with me in my divine euphony. Float with me in my phantasmal heaven. Whirl with me in my fragile bubble. Fly with me as I escape reality

Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Wishful

I saw an elderly couple on the street. They strolled leisurely, gazing at store windows and stopping for snow cones. He waited patiently as she surveyed shoes. She smiled to herself as he stopped to stare at toy cars. Maybe some things never change, I thought. Maybe the boy or the girl in us lives on forever.

They stopped at a traffic light, cars zipping past in a hurried world that was once theirs. He peered right and she to the left. An unsaid protocol, a tiny idiosyncrasy ingrained in them and habituated over the years. They locked hands with each other and off they went across the road. Did she always walk on his left? Did he take her hand or did she take his? Was it practice or was it chance? No one could say. I’m sure.

They spoke softly, about this and that. He leaned close to her and said something. She let out a low delighted laugh. He chuckled, his eyes twinkling mischievously at his own joke. Did they not argue when they were younger, I wondered. Maybe differences fade away gently. Maybe over time, they had become a little more like each other. But today there was a lovely harmony as they walked along. They were perfectly in step with each other, their pace, fluid and gentle like the breathing of a sleeping child.

It began to rain, a slight drizzle, all but lost in a gusty breeze. He flipped open his umbrella. He didn’t wait, she didn’t hesitate. He wrapped his arm around her shoulder and she took a step closer to him. They walked on, her own umbrella still dangling from her arm. They slowly walked homeward, this profound moment probably just one of the countless others they took for granted.

To me, it was a magical reality dazzling in front of my eyes. I stood there, even as the drizzle became a pattering rain, and looked on at a love that had stood the test of time. I stood there and promised myself our own autumn evening. In that crystallized moment I knew that all I want to do is grow old with you.

10 comments:

Bala Subramniam said...

Narration equals or even better than tamil movie directors! Long live artistic way of looking at things...

frissko said...

Fact or fiction? It's very vivid, so wondering if i should give in to the content or go by the title. Lovely, either ways.

Have you read 'Golden gate'? It has such an endearing oldish couple. (I think they're my favourite fictional couple)...

Brood Mode said...

Bala: Thanks, glad you like the post

frissko: The couple and the events of the evening are pure fiction, I promise :-) Thanks for the book recommendation. I love Vikram Seth. Will read this one soon I guess.

catalyst said...

beautiful imagination (if) :)

Brood Mode said...

catalyst: Thanks! And welcome to the blog.

Arti Honrao said...

Awesome! I love the way this is written...
Easy flow of words, easier to imagine :)
Hope it is ok if I share this post :D


GBU
Arti
P.S. Visited after a long time. Good to see that you are still blogging!

SYED MOHAMMAD ZAKIUR RAHEMAN said...

Nice fictional texts,used to communicate love.

Kavitha. said...

Re-read this one after a long time. Simply beautiful. Makes one want to fall in love :)

Jyotsna said...

how beautifully expressed

Inconsequential said...

17yrs...
and I feel we might be getting there...

 
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