I saw those waters…
The silver blue sparkle
Awakened a sense
of sheer passion.
I touched those waters…
The flowing velvet
Brought gentle ripples
of forgotten memories
I drank from those waters…
It still lingers-
The sweet taste
of purity.
I listened to those waters…
As the waves rolled and lashed-
The rhythm instilled
a deeper calm.
I swam in those waters…
Every stroke- a tiny step
towards the horizon,
towards my dream.
I drowned in those waters…
From the immense deep
I surfaced anew,
clutching life tighter.
I went on a weekend trip to a place called Honnermadu (Karnataka, India).
The photo is that of a reservoir in Honnermadu and these are all the emotions those waters evoked.
18 comments:
Wonderful !!!
I dreamt of those waters
Its waves lapped
And enveloped me
To a calm sleep
:-)
:) good post that......been quite sometime,now i know where have u been!
This is lovely. Beautifully written.
P-H-A-N-T-O-M, Praveen : Thanx a lot. Do visit again
.:A:. : wow! i like it when my poem hasthat effect.
samudraa: will catch up with u soon
Thanks. My pleasure.
"It's only after you've lost everything that you're free to do anything. " Tyler Durden (Fight Club, 1999)
"I drowned in those waters…
From the immense deep
I surfaced anew,
clutching life tighter."
How similar they are in meaning!! Nice blog. came here from Samudraa's blog. Peace!
wow feelings so well-expressed with the magic of deep blue waters...
Bet u had fun!
Keshi.
sriram: thanx! do visit again
keshi: sure, it was awesome!
Nice lines, lovely description..:)
thy evoke the color green in me - envy :)
nice poetry...
I liked this one more than the others you've written - especially the ending.
Brilliant - keep 'em coming.
nithya: thanx, i'm sure u could relate to it
manuscrypts: why didnt u join?
anon: thanx
musafir: sure, will do
...I surfaced anew,
clutching life tighter...
nice. btw where in k'taka is Honnermadu?
sigmund: it's near shimoga
Lovely picture and lovely verses, I really envy people who can write in verses, I cannot.
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